Yes! Another week, another Friday Fictioneers. Every Wednesday, Madison Woods posts a photo on her blog. Every Friday, she presents a 100 word story based on the picture, and people from all over the Internet post comments with links to their own stories based on the same picture.
I always appreciate constructive criticism-if you are confused by something or things just don’t make sense, please let me know!
Here is the photo:
Here is my story:
We stood on the porch and watched the moon drift among the clouds.
“I keep having that same dream over and over, you know?”, he said at last. “I keep seeing how thin he was. Like how he hadn’t eaten for days.”
“Anything else happen?”
“He comes and takes my hand, and we go into the dark together.”
“You’re 27, man. He lived to be like 67. You got a long time before then.”
“Yeah, I know.” He sighed. “Thanks for walking me home.”
I stepped off the porch, zipped up my jacket, and headed home.