“Isn’t that Stu’s bike over there?”
The bartender wiped the last pint glass clean, set it down, and glanced outside at the sycamore tree.
“Yeah, that’s his all right.”
“Someone buy it or something?”
“Nope. Been there ever since he died.”
“I thought he…”
“Died at home, yeah,” said the bartender. “But on the day he passed, I looked outside at four thirty or so and there’s the damned bike. Could have sworn it wasn’t there at opening.”
“Didn’t old Stu come by every day…”
“Around four thirty. Like clockwork.”
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I return after a one week intermission! I have briefly traded the steamy forests of North Carolina to the pleasantly dry and treeless expanse of New Mexico. I promise I’ll be better about keeping up the weekly serving of fiction from now on! Anyway…Every Friday, writers from all around the world write 100 word (or thereabouts) flash fiction based on a photo posted that Wednesday on Rochelle Wisoff-Fields’ blog.
I welcome constructive criticism; without it I cannot grow as a writer. The weekly photo that inspired this story is below:
Great idea, with a touch of sadness mingled with spookiness. Well done
Thanks!
Dear Danny,
I guess Stu liked to keep an appointment, dead or alive. Touching story.
Shalom,
Rochelle
He did, or he just couldn’t let go of that afternoon pint.
Eerie.
Thanks! The real question is – would it have even been possible to see the bike appear in the first place, or did it wait till no one was looking?
Nice. Makes me want to know more.
Thank you! Stu liked that particular pub a lot, I suppose.
Good paranormal story. And this sort of thing happens. Ann
It does happen, and the funny thing is that there probably is a perfectly good explanation – yet our mind leaps to the paranormal one.
Good job, Danny, and I hope you’re having a great time in New Mexico.
janet
Thanks, I did. It was nice to take a break from research for a while.
I love stories like this. The dead are with us, animals and humans. My first time here. I enjoyed your explanation of glossarch.
Welcome, and thanks for the kind words!